So I decided to listen…

So I decided to listen to all you lovely people and started on the continuing tale! I have just posted the 2nd part to the One Summer Day fiction. Here is the post titled: That First Meeting!
I would love some #feedback and advice too!
Here are some of my concerns:

  • Is the ending cliche?
  • Since the story is being told in a flashback mode, is it too predictable?
  • Are the lead characters (Anna and Dave) believable?
  • Did I describe their characteristics enough, or did I over do it? (this is something I always struggle with!)
  • Is the length of the post good enough? Is it too long or too short?

I know I am asking too many questions, it’s probably the insecurities of a first time writer! 😀
#feedback #help