So I decided to listen to all you lovely people and started on the continuing tale! I have just posted the 2nd part to the One Summer Day fiction. Here is the post titled: That First Meeting!
I would love some #feedback and advice too!
Here are some of my concerns:
- Is the ending cliche?
- Since the story is being told in a flashback mode, is it too predictable?
- Are the lead characters (Anna and Dave) believable?
- Did I describe their characteristics enough, or did I over do it? (this is something I always struggle with!)
- Is the length of the post good enough? Is it too long or too short?