Three Ways to Dock a Motorboat

I wrote a little piece last night – I suppose it’s not my first attempt at humour but I haven’t done many humorous pieces and I’m not sure about this one. It feels a bit heavy-handed to me but my older daughter was in stitches when she read it so I posted it anyway.

I wouldn’t mind some impartial #feedback though! Especially because I’m committed to a second part (it was too long to do it one) which I’m trying to complete by Friday or Saturday. Perhaps @pamkirst2014 since you teach about writing? 🙂 And all you creative writers on this forum? @drmegsorick, @fictionalkevin?

Link here: Three Ways to Dock a Motorboat (Part I). The story is part of my Upriver series (for those of you who know what that is).

Thanks a lot!