I wrote a little piece last night – I suppose it’s not my first attempt at humour but I haven’t done many humorous pieces and I’m not sure about this one. It feels a bit heavy-handed to me but my older daughter was in stitches when she read it so I posted it anyway.
I wouldn’t mind some impartial #feedback though! Especially because I’m committed to a second part (it was too long to do it one) which I’m trying to complete by Friday or Saturday. Perhaps @pamkirst2014 since you teach about writing? 🙂 And all you creative writers on this forum? @drmegsorick, @fictionalkevin?
Thanks a lot!