surbhisachdeva89 6:50 am on June 10, 2016
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Hey Guys,

This time I’ve written about Simple Living and High Thinking.

Well, this is not originally written by me. My brother wrote this for his holidays homework. I just felt like sharing it with with you all as this was a good write up by him and secondly the mantra of simple living and high thinking is still important in our lives and should be implemented 🙂

I hope you like reading it!

https://surbhisachdeva89.wordpress.com/2016/06/10/simple-living-high-thinking/

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arwen1968 9:24 am on June 10, 2016

I had a look — how old is your brother? Depending on his age, I think only the teachers among us would be able to comment how well this is written! 🙂

I only feel able to give you feedback on the way the post looks – you’ve used a large font all in capitals and it makes for difficult reading this way, I think. Also in internet/e-mail parlance using capitals is considered the equivalent of shouting, which is I’m sure not your intention… so I’d suggest you turn the font into lower case and paragraph it (whether or not your brother originally paragraphed it) because that would make it much easier for people to read… Obviously if you want to particularly emphasise a word, you can leave that in capitals (or use bold or italics). I hope this helps! 🙂
- surbhisachdeva89 10:36 am on June 10, 2016
  
  I don’t know why the post is displayed in large fonts. While posting it, it was visible in small font and after posting it, it shows the whole post in capital letters. When I try to edit it, then again the words are shown normal I don’t know what’s the issue! I’ll try again…I’ve not put the words in capital letters initially.
  
  And, about my brother.. He is in class 8th but much mature than his years. Though of course he has taken help from the internet but the way he has framed the whole information does not look like the work of a 13 year old boy. And, I am glad that you found the write up well. Thank you @arwen1968 🙂
pamkirst2014 2:06 am on June 11, 2016

An interesting format for worthwhile thoughts! I thought of a torrent of words. Your brother is a thinker!!!
- surbhisachdeva89 5:26 am on June 11, 2016
  
  Thank you… @pamkirst2014 ☺

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