Hey y’all! I’m writing a…

Hey y’all! I’m writing a post about a woman I recently met, but I don’t feel like it’s a good piece yet. I would love some new perspectives. If you have ideas for small changes, or big revisions, please do let me know! Let me know if the link doesn’t work… I’ve changed the visibility of this site (my old blog) and not sure if it’ll work like this.
https://theexpatteacher.wordpress.com/2016/01/20/meet-vibrant-retired-and-wandering/

Thanks in advance for the #feedback!!!