Would love some feedback!

Hey everyone! I’m new here (just finished the November course) and this community looks so wonderful! I can’t wait to engage more in it.
I’m posting for the first time, hoping some of you might give me some #feedback on this post: Are You Smart? It isn’t sitting right with me – I like the purpose, the message, but I’m not happy with how it flows and transitions from one part to the next. If you have any comments, suggestions, ideas to improve it, I would love to hear them. One of my main goals in blogging to improve my writing so I’m open to any and all feedback. I welcome feedback anywhere, if you happen to stumble around my blog a bit. 🙂
Your help is much appreciated!