thinkerv0 5:41 pm on November 25, 2015
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Evils of lobola and dowry!

Dear friends,

Inspired by a neighbor’s post I wrote a post about social evils lobola and dowry in Zimbawve and India. Please give me your precious feedback and help me improve!

Love and light ❤
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Anand 🙂

WanderLaur 7:43 pm on November 25, 2015

I quite enjoyed the post, especially since I learned something new. You gave a good, clear description of lobola and dowry, and linked for more information, which is great to have! I like how you gave information, stated your opinion, and asked thought-provoking questions.

In thinking of suggestions, I would love to see you write something like this with your opinion coming through more strongly. I find the most engaging posts are those with a strong opinion and well thought-out/researched arguments, and often give a “call to action” – ask the reader to do something. This may not be your style (I know I struggle with it – my last post was my attempt at this style), so I won’t be offended if you disagree. I wanted to offer an idea because I thought the post was really fantastic! 🙂

Cheers!
- Vibrant 7:48 pm on November 25, 2015
  
  Thanks for your thorough feedback, Lauren. I agree that there is not a call-for-action, which is the case in most of my posts because I really don’t put much time for research. So, you may assume that these articles, and most on my site are just preparations for one article which will be a call-for-action and ideal one. Though I thoroughly enjoy what I have now looking for feedback and improvement from wonderful friends such as yourself 🙂 🙂
  - WanderLaur 10:13 pm on November 25, 2015
    
    I can’t wait to read that article! 😉
    - Vibrant 10:22 pm on November 25, 2015
      
      It will be a long long time to reach there LOL 😀

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